Here is an excellent chart for proofreading text.
On improving writing skills
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Luke
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Re: On improving writing skills
Captivating! 
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Maria
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Re: On improving writing skills
Luke wrote:Captivating!
Mesmerizing!
Lord Jesus Christ, have mercy on me a sinner.
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Luke
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Re: On improving writing skills
entrancing 
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Maria
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Re: On improving writing skills
Luke wrote:entrancing
bewitched
Lord Jesus Christ, have mercy on me a sinner.
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Luke
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Re: On improving writing skills
Elizabeth Montgomery. 
Re: On improving writing skills
I know I way overdo the use of very. Sometimes it does fit right ; other times one of these substitutes would assuredly add spice to one's sentence.
Samantha.